EDITING FOR FINAL STORYBOARD

WEEK 6 DAY 3

This is the selection of images I used in the story board for the first draft of my short story

I went on to annotate this A1 storyboard editing the plot and introducing new ideas for the sequence as-well as taking out less interesting/relevant images to make room for the new images.

This shows the stress of homework through the pose of the protagonist in my short story- 'boy'.

This is where the boy gets so stressed he contemplates suicide with a gun held to his head.

Luckily he reconsiders the suicide and instead wants to relieve some stress by bouncing on the trampoline.

The struggle begins when boy realises this is not an ordinary trampoline and the bounce sends him up ridiculously high past the clouds much like a 'Looney tunes' cartoon.

Much later on at night time the boy crash lands next to the trampoline, he is disorientated and confused. 

Boy decides to head back into his home.

Instead of seeing his family watching TV as expected he is shocked to see a bunch of monster like people from a parallel universe watching TV.

This is a redraft of the original image I took above, I feel this image has a stronger composition.

This still shows boy in absolute shock.

 



Instead of running away (which was one of my original ideas) boy just accepts that these people are freaks and sits down next to them to watch TV and relax relieving stress...READ ON, THROUGH BLOG POST NAMED: FINAL CUT STORYBOARD...